Great work Cam - you have made excellent use of a wide range of camera angles and have also used a variety of movements with the tracking shots being particularly successful.
I like the choice of non-diegetic sound in your music as it adds to the piece.
The final few seconds are the weakest area where you have not edited out your 3-2-1 command completely and there is a break in your continuity editing.
Overall though, this is a real improvement. Well done.
Great work Cam - you have made excellent use of a wide range of camera angles and have also used a variety of movements with the tracking shots being particularly successful.
ReplyDeleteI like the choice of non-diegetic sound in your music as it adds to the piece.
The final few seconds are the weakest area where you have not edited out your 3-2-1 command completely and there is a break in your continuity editing.
Overall though, this is a real improvement. Well done.